fix(voice): make the terse cut a mandatory final pass

Pattern #38 (omit needless words) was one of 41 walked mid-list, so it got glossed as a checkbox instead of the real "cut it in half" sweep. A commit message went out today needing two manual Orwell-walk requests before it read terse, even though /voice personal had run.

The rule already said to cut hard. The gap was position. Buried in the middle of the walk, #38 lost to the categorical detectors that come back clean while the text still runs a third too long.

I moved it to an explicit standalone last step in the SKILL.md Process, run after every other pattern and right before the draft is shown. Now the first draft the user sees is already terse, not terse only after they ask. Profile §38 gains an execution-position rule and a history entry. The commits.md publish gate points at #38 as the last pass.

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diff --git a/claude-rules/commits.md b/claude-rules/commits.md
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--- a/claude-rules/commits.md
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@@ -414,7 +414,7 @@ conversation (e.g. "commit this as `chore: bump version`", "reply just
 `/review-code` in Step 1 still runs when it applies; Phase 0 of that skill
 handles trivial diffs, and acknowledgment-only replies don't need it at all.
 
-**Single-skill gate.** Each of the three subflows above runs `/voice personal` before printing the draft — 41 patterns covering AI-writing signs, universal good-writing rules, Craig's voice patterns, and the three artifact-mechanics patterns (first-person rewrite, public-artifact scope flag, praise/correction asymmetry). Publish artifacts (commits, PR titles + bodies, PR review comments) always use personal mode; the `.ai/`-tracking check at the top of Step 2 decides only whether the approval gate fires, not which patterns run. Running the skill is mandatory; the printed draft must have been through it. When the user asks mid-flow for "the voice pass" on an in-progress draft, that means re-run the full 41-pattern walk — not a subset. Always state that the skill ran when announcing the printed draft (e.g. "/voice personal — 41 patterns walked"). Skipping the pass without flagging it is a defect.
+**Single-skill gate.** Each of the three subflows above runs `/voice personal` before printing the draft — 41 patterns covering AI-writing signs, universal good-writing rules, Craig's voice patterns, and the three artifact-mechanics patterns (first-person rewrite, public-artifact scope flag, praise/correction asymmetry). Publish artifacts (commits, PR titles + bodies, PR review comments) always use personal mode; the `.ai/`-tracking check at the top of Step 2 decides only whether the approval gate fires, not which patterns run. Running the skill is mandatory; the printed draft must have been through it. When the user asks mid-flow for "the voice pass" on an in-progress draft, that means re-run the full 41-pattern walk — not a subset. Always state that the skill ran when announcing the printed draft (e.g. "/voice personal — 41 patterns walked"). Skipping the pass without flagging it is a defect. The terse/omit-needless-words cut (pattern #38) is the *last* thing the skill does before the draft is printed: read each sentence and cut it in half, keeping only what changes meaning. The draft the user first sees must already be terse — if they have to ask for an Orwell pass after seeing it, the pass was skipped.
 
 **If `/voice` is unavailable.** The skill should be installed (it ships with rulesets), but a fresh or partial environment may not have it. Don't let that block the publish, and don't skip the discipline silently. Walk the same patterns inline — they're documented in the skill, and the publish flow already names which ones matter (first-person rewrite, semicolons → periods/commas, contractions, sentence-split, felt-experience cut, fragment rewrite, terse cut, the pattern #39 public-artifact scope flag, plus the AI-writing and good-writing passes). Then state that the skill was unavailable and the pass was applied by hand (e.g. "/voice unavailable — patterns walked inline"). The gate is the pattern walk, not the tooling; the skill is the convenient way to run it, not the only way. Flag the missing skill so it gets installed.